Revamped Wolf Summoning

[Harris]

Summoning Species: Wolf
History of the contract: These Wolfs are Special in the matter that they carry the ability to manipulate the shadows. It is unknown where Atsushi and Ayumu came from, but they are the “Pack” Leaders. Though It takes barley anything to summon Yoshizawa, only Chuunin and up have been known to summon Tadayoshi and Momiji. Jounin and up should be able to summon Ayumu and Atsushi. Other than that, much more isn’t known about these wolfs.
How to Recive Contract: To Receive this contract, you must travel to the Shadow Village and battle all five of them. If you defeat them, you may have the contract. But if you lose, you lose your life. Summoning them is difficult. S Rank and up can summon #5 and under. Jounin can summon #4 and bellow, chuunin can summon #3 and lower, and genin can summon #2 and #1
Village: ---

Rank Rules:

Genin can summon level one, chuunin can summon levels 1-3, jounin can summon 1-4 and Elites, S Ranks and Kages can summon 1-5.

In total, The Total for a summoning is Five. In other words, you could summon Levels One and Four at the same time, or summon level five alone. This Rule remains for all ranks, but if you are a Genin, you can only summon the level one, as that is all you can use.


Rank One Summoning
Name: Yoshizawa
Description: Yoshizawa is a mere Wolf Pup and only knows the basic techniques. His claws are dull so his Seya Slash is weak
Attacks:
Shadow Wolf Clone: A special technique that is known as the Shadow Clone Technique to Humans
Shadow Clone Explosion: At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but the user can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Shadow Claw: This Jutshu is the more basic form of shadow arm. Like Shadow Arm, it can claw the foe, but unlike Shadow Arm, it cannot catch the foe.
Wolf Vortex: Uses the wolf and allows them to use a spinning attack agents the enemy, causing extreme Damage.
Seya Slash: Uses his claws to attack the foe, in a pattern of 8 slashes, 16 slashes, 32 slashes, and finally 64 slashes
Dark Bite: The Wolf will bite the foe, to where the enemy bleeds, and can have extreme damage.


Rank Two Summoning
Name: Tadayoshi
Description: Tadayoshi is the same size of Yoshizawa, but is three months older and has a few more skills than him.
Attacks:
Shadow Wolf Clone: A special technique that is known as the Shadow Clone Technique to Humans
Shadow Clone Explosion: At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but the user can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Shadow Claw: This Jutshu is the more basic form of shadow arm. Like Shadow Arm, it can claw the foe, but unlike Shadow Arm, it cannot catch the foe.
Shadow Trap Jutshu: This Jutshu works like Shadow Possession, but can only catch the foe instead of control them
Wolf Vortex: Uses the wolf and allows them to use a spinning attack agents the enemy, causing extreme Damage.
Seya Slash: Uses his claws to attack the foe, in a pattern of 8 slashes, 16 slashes, 32 slashes, and finally 64 slashes
Dark Bite: The Wolf will bite the foe, to where the enemy bleeds, and can have extreme damage.


Rank Three Summoning
Name: Momiji
Description: Momiji is the most commonly seen wolf. His claws are longer than even Atsushi and he is about the size of a fully grown wolf. He has an ego and prefers to handle things himself.
Attacks:
Shadow Wolf Clone: A special technique that is known as the Shadow Clone Technique to Humans
Shadow Clone Explosion: At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but the user can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Shadow Claw: This Jutshu is the more basic form of shadow arm. Like Shadow Arm, it can claw the foe, but unlike Shadow Arm, it cannot catch the foe.
Shadow Trap Jutshu: This Jutshu works like Shadow Possession, but can only catch the foe instead of control them
Wolf Vortex: Uses the wolf and allows them to use a spinning attack agents the enemy, causing extreme Damage.
Howler: A powerful sonic boom, which can destroy an operating ear.
Seya Slash: Uses his claws to attack the foe, in a pattern of 8 slashes, 16 slashes, 32 slashes, and finally 64 slashes
Dark Bite: The Wolf will bite the foe, to where the enemy bleeds, and can have extreme damage.



Rank Four Summoning
Name: Ayumu
Description: The Sole Female of the Summoning. Ayumu is a larger than Momiji but smaller than Atsushi. She has Black Fur and a scar across her mussel. She’s a lay back person and prefers to end battles fast.
Attacks:
Shadow Wolf Clone: A special technique that is known as the Shadow Clone Technique to Humans
Shadow Clone Explosion: At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but the user can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Shadow Claw: This Jutshu is the more basic form of shadow arm. Like Shadow Arm, it can claw the foe, but unlike Shadow Arm, it cannot catch the foe.
Shadow Trap Jutshu: This Jutshu works like Shadow Possession, but can only catch the foe instead of control them
Wolf Vortex: Uses the wolf and allows them to use a spinning attack agents the enemy, causing extreme Damage.
Howler: A powerful sonic boom, which can destroy an operating ear.
Seya Slash: Uses his claws to attack the foe, in a pattern of 8 slashes, 16 slashes, 32 slashes, and finally 64 slashes
Dark Bite: The Wolf will bite the foe, to where the enemy bleeds, and can have extreme damage.

Rank Five Summoning
Name: Atsushi
Description: The leader of the pack. He is the largest wolf and has great leadership skills. He has black fur and knows nearly all of the shadow techniques. He is the Serious one of the pack
Attacks:
Shadow Wolf Clone: A special technique that is known as the Shadow Clone Technique to Humans
Shadow Clone Explosion: At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but the user can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Shadow Claw: This Jutshu is the more basic form of shadow arm. Like Shadow Arm, it can claw the foe, but unlike Shadow Arm, it cannot catch the foe.
Shadow Trap Jutshu: This Jutshu works like Shadow Possession, but can only catch the foe instead of control them
Shadow Dragon Jutshu: A Dark Dragon Leaps out from the shadows for one attack. It slams into the foe, injuring them to where they feel extreme pain
Wolf Vortex: Uses the wolf and allows them to use a spinning attack agents the enemy, causing extreme Damage.
Howler: A powerful sonic boom, which can destroy an operating ear.
Seya Slash: Uses his claws to attack the foe, in a pattern of 8 slashes, 16 slashes, 32 slashes, and finally 64 slashes
Dark Bite: The Wolf will bite the foe, to where the enemy bleeds, and can have extreme damage.

[Shadow Dragon]

Denied for now. I have a reason, however.

Naturally, your character will receive this as well, and we can both agree killing these five won't be a problem if you wanted to. However, you already have a wolf summon in which you can summon up to ten in your profile? I believe that is right. Not only do these summons seem very powerful themselves, but they have immensely strong jutsus. I don't mean to say all their jutsus are strong, but a good amount of them area (looking at the group in general). These would be like a mini army, I can't allow that. Not only are you attempting to let them manipulate shadows, but you're allowing anyone who can beat them to summon the first? Shadow manipulation, as we can both agree, is not only a very dangerous task but it is also hard. Either way, the final two (jounin level?) are far stronger than the majority of the others. One of them has a shadow move similar to gaara's ultimate defense? They also have shadow arm.. Summon the five, shadow arm your opponent and have the other four rip him to pieces? Not very fair. I know you took the jutsus from your profile, but they're just too strong for you to have five wolves, that are strong themselves, to be capable of doing this. Not to mention they have more jutsus and you already have another summon.. However, the other summon isn't necessarily a big problem. This isn't denied permanently, you can change it or prove me wrong. However be detailed, I don't want to have to argue back and forth.

[Harris]

It takes alot to summon a Rank 4, let alone above. You can basically summon Level 1 and 4 at the same time, level 1, 2, and 3 at the same time, or a 1, 2, 3, 4, or 5 by themselves.

I also found my newer Format better than the current one, considering it gives different ranks and attacks.

Also, I would naturally have them, but he doesn't really summon anything like ever.

Beating them is pritty easy once you learn how the wolfs fight, which you can learn by attempting to sign contract with them

[Shadow Dragon]

Well you should add all that in there for it to be less confusing

Anyway, I thought only shadow village members could join them? if so, it won't be easy for other people to learn to fight them, which means it'll be a lot harder for other people to defeat them. Not only that, but a stronger ninja could probably summon 4 and 5 together if he/she has a lot of chakra and is strong enough. That gives them a great advantage over people normally around their level, totally dominating any other summon they could have. Summons, I believe, can get stronger if you learn to control them better, so these wolves have more potential than are initially shown. So, I still have a problem there..


EDIT: Reason I say you need to be part of the shadow village is because the shadow village isn't allied with anyone, and it is very dangerous, let alone stupid, to travel through dangerous territory like that.

[Harris]

It depends on who it is. I can forbid people from signing, but if there are people that Sengar's met and became friends with, He'd probably let them. so on, so forth.

[Shadow Dragon]

That's the problem, you technically choose who gets it. Besides the fact you probably control the wolves when they fight them. So that way, you could have your own, incredibly strong, mini army without much effort. That's a serious problem when I look on it from a GM point of view.

[Harris]

we'd control them, but it would be kinda random. if we got a few scripts in, I could edit one to make it randomly select a technique

[Sachi;;Tsunade]

This summoning seems a bit...too...powerful. By the looks of things, if someone managed to summon them, they can be almost completely unstable. It would require a lot of chakra to summon something as great as that, and it wouldn't seem fair to anyone else who are weaker than the summoners. It doesn't matter if Sengar doesn't use summonings anyways, because whoever manage to get the summoning may use it as many as they like and can easily bring down a few minor villages.

And you already have a wolf summoning...which isn't showing in your mini-profile because of the stupid code...

[Harris]

I removed the Shadow Shield

The only difference about these are 1) better format 2) they know shadow clone and shadow clone explosion 3) Summoning them is difficult. S Rank and up can summon #5 and under. Jounin can summon #4 and bellow, chuunin can summon #3 and lower, and genin can summon #2 and #1

[Sachi;;Tsunade]

Yeah, yeah, I know...better format.

Wolf Vortex and Dark Bite for Genins seem too powerful...the jutsu's effects, I mean. Kiba and Akamaru cannot possibly cause damage like that when they were Genins. (I'm just using them as an example because they also used canines) And how big of a explosion is the 'Shadow Clone Explosion' ?

[Shadow Dragon]

Your first set of wolves didn't have jutsus, wasn't stated so they didn't have. So there is a big difference.

Even without the shield, the trap and kill effects are still there with the easily initiated combos. Not to mention:

Seya Slash: Uses his claws to attack the foe, in a pattern of 8 slashes, 16 slashes, 32 slashes, and finally 64 slashes

Dark Bite: The Wolf will bite the foe, to where the enemy bleeds, and can have extreme damage.

Shadow Claw: This Jutshu is the more basic form of shadow arm. Like Shadow Arm, it can claw the foe, but unlike Shadow Arm, it cannot catch the foe.

Wolf Vortex: Uses the wolf and allows them to use a spinning attack agents the enemy, causing extreme Damage.

Howler: A powerful sonic boom, which can destroy an operating ear.


I can't say I'm sure what "claw" the foe means. Do you mean claw as in slash them? Or grab them? Not to mention: "Destroy an operating ear." A jutsu like that may be all right, but for one a genin can summon? These were taking from the original wolf, aka number 1. These jutsus are very powerful, and it's just the first wolf.

[Harris]

shadowdragon said:

Your first set of wolves didn't have jutsus, wasn't stated so they didn't have. So there is a big difference.

None of them are kill moves. Shadow trap catches their legs, they can still fight

Even without the shield, the trap and kill effects are still there with the easily initiated combos. Not to mention:

Seya Slash: Uses his claws to attack the foe, in a pattern of 8 slashes, 16 slashes, 32 slashes, and finally 64 slashes

Dark Bite: The Wolf will bite the foe, to where the enemy bleeds, and can have extreme damage.

Shadow Claw: This Jutshu is the more basic form of shadow arm. Like Shadow Arm, it can claw the foe, but unlike Shadow Arm, it cannot catch the foe.

Wolf Vortex: Uses the wolf and allows them to use a spinning attack agents the enemy, causing extreme Damage.

Howler: A powerful sonic boom, which can destroy an operating ear.


I can't say I'm sure what "claw" the foe means. Do you mean claw as in slash them? Or grab them? Slash. The First wolf doesn't have long claws thou Not to mention: "Destroy an operating ear." A jutsu like that may be all right, but for one a genin can summon I'll take it off -_- ? These were taking from the original wolf, aka number 1. These jutsus are very powerful, and it's just the first wolf.

[Shadow Dragon]

Anything can kill. If they stated they were instant kill it's obvious I'd never accept them. If they don't have long claws, state it. But a description on each wolf. You're saying these things but there's no palpable proof. Write the proof, and I'll change my mind. Probably change it, at least.

[Harris]

I did -_-

[Shadow Dragon]

Make it Genin can summon 1, chuunin can summon 1, 2, 3, jounin can summon 1, 2, 3, 4 and strong jounins (Elites or S-Ranked) can summon 1, 2, 3, 4, 5. Also do this:

Level 1: Uses 1/10 of persons max chakra.

Level 2: Uses 3/10 of persons max chakra.

Level 3: Uses 5/10 of persons max chakra.

Level 4: Uses 7/10 of persons max chakra.

Level 5: Uses 9/10 of persons max chakra.

Only levels 1, 2, 3 can be summoned with another wolf. However, only two wolves can be summoned at once. (The chakra used is not permanently lost and can be regained.) However, you may make ranks 4 and 5 slightly stronger now. If you do you must tell me here before I approve it. If you do otherwise I will have to deny it. Just make it fair, just a little stronger but rank 5 can be a bit stronger than that since it uses a lot of chakra, and I'll accept.


Add all this, reply here, and I'll give another look. I'll probably accept it though, so no worries. However, delete them from your profile at the moment. You added them earlier, before accepted, which is a direct violation of them not being accepted. I won't penalize it for you, I'm just asking you to remove them until I accept these formally. It won't be much longer, don't worry. I just recently got this idea of the chakra and rank changes..