Post by Shadow Dragon on Feb 23, 2008 19:00:23 GMT -5
Sub Plots: (I guess?)
Ryuumaru and his group of Kaguyas moved on. After three days they met with the rest of the remaining Kaguyas. Twelve in all, the remaining descendants of a once abundant clan. They sat together, plotting the downfall of their long former home. After about seven hours the plotting and mapping was complete. With the plan for destruction of their former home complete, the kaguya shinobi went to sleep.
Kiragakure, home to the shinobi who persecuted and destroyed their family. With the village in sight, the plan was put into motion. Three kaguyas attacked at the front gate, blowing the walls down and infiltrating the village. From the left and right, two kaguyas infiltrated at each side. From behind the village, another two ninjas infiltrated. After about ten minutes of fighting, Ryuumaru and his partner entered the village. As the fighting continued, Ryuumaru saw two of his brethren dead. With a furious snarl, Ryuumaru unleashed his assault.
As Ryuumaru's partner went off to help the others, Ryuu ran deep into the village. "Hone Bakuhatsu!" As Ryuu flexed his muscles and body, shards of his bones flew out of his skin. The bones crashed into buildings, peoples, trees.. everything. Whatever stood in the bones' path was destroyed. In a few moments, Ryuu had destroyed a good portion of the village's center and now headed for the kage building. Standing in front of the kage building, Ryuu smiled with his wicked grin."Kurgonae Honetou!" Ryuu stuck his hands into the groun, feeding his bones into it. Within moments an enormous bone tower erupted from under the kage building, spiking its way through every room and every corridor. Within minutes the entire building crumbled and was destroyed.
Satisfied with his job and believing the kage dead, Ryuumaru called his men off as they retreated. There were only ten of them left and they were injured, but Kiragakure had been completely shaken and their kage was slain. With another wicked grin, Ryuumaru and his troops went off to recuperate and plan their clan's recovery.
In the ruins of the building, a hand pushed out of the debris. Jounin ran forward, clearing debris and pulling the body out. Kiragakure's kage spit some blood out, cursing himself for letting this happen. "d**n.. Kaguya's are back? How.. and who was that man. Quick, we must alert others!" The kage closed his eyes, passing out from exhaustion and blood loss.
** Any other clans you want? I'll try working on Senjus later. I've got the basics down for them but need to research a little more. I want details ;D!
Note: I will do Haku and Uchiha plots in a moment. I wanna finish dinner first xD
Post by Shadow Dragon on Feb 24, 2008 14:36:28 GMT -5
Sub Plot: Haku.
It was midnight with the moon full in the sky. The three haku clan members ran through the forest without making a sound, racing to their destination. The three man group contained two men and one female. One of the men seemed to be the oldest in the group and the leader, whiles the other two appeared around the same age. As they raced towards their goal, the female addressed the leader. "Lord Seyren, I'll scout ahead." The leader nodded at her, "Very well Kyoumi." He then looked over to his shoulder at the other member of the group, "Zen, initiate plan B."
Kyoumi was he first to act, with quick handseals she activated her potent Kiragakure jutsu. The kiragukure spread throughout the forest, a mist so thick it was impossible to see through. As she finished, Zen began his handseals. When he activated his jutsu, the group was able to see through the mist like it was barely even there. With the next jutsu he activated the group began to speed up, running on the mist above the ground like it was solid. Kyoumi vanished as she went to scout and the remaining two members ran alone for about ten minutes.
After the ten minutes, Kyoumi returned. "Lord Seyren, I had to execute three shinobi but the path is now clear. The place is to our southeast, about a quarter mile." Nodding, Seyren led the group on. After they got to the area described, Seyren began to activate a jutsu. After three minutes of handseals, the aura around the hakus in the group began to glow ice blue with their chakra. Across the world, the same thing happened with the other hakus in hiding but in a lesser degree. Now, the message sent, the group just waited.
After three days, a group of seventeen hakus was formed. Seyren nodded to the group, "Very well my brethren, It is time. We shall now take our revenge upon the world. The hakus that aren't here have decided not to join of conquest, or couldn't make it. They are still our brethren, without violent acts against us we shall spare them. The rest of the world shall pay!." With a roar of enthusiasm, the group rejoiced in their new lives. Preparing for war, the group remained active throughout most of the night.
At around 4 A.M. in the morning, Seyren woke his group of hakus out. They prepared for two hours and then decided to move out. They charged across the land of the whirlpool country, making their way to a small village near the area. The village wasn't famous throughout the ninja world, but it was their first step in revenge. The hakus made last minute preparations and launched their attack.
A giant, thick mist surrounded the village. Suddenly it began to rain but the unnatural mist remained standing. After a few moments, the rain began to become slippery and black.. almost like oil. Suddenly Seyren jumped through the air from a nearby tree, firing a unique Katon Jutsu and lighting the oil on fire. The emerald flame only grew strong in the water, burning down anything in its path. With the signal the other ninjas began to attack. In a flurry of handseals, water dragons, sharks, and other Suiton moves began to rampage through the area.
After fifteen minutes the village was destroyed, when suddenly one of the hakus was shot down. The suiton skill looked like it came from one of their members. The other hakus immediately went on the defensive. Cursing himself, Seyren noticed the one extra member who used the jutsu. Breaking the henge, the shinobi darted away from the group. In a few minutes, shinobi surrounded the group from all sides. Seyren cursed hismelf once more, not noticing the trap. As his men grouped together, preparing to fight for death, Seyren gave them telepathic commands. Kyoumi use Kiragakure, Zen yoru sight jutsu. The other of you shall run to the mountains, we make our stand there.
In a sudden flurry of movement the plan took place. Working perfectly, the group escaped to the mountains as the other shinobi chased after them. Only one enemy shinobi remained behind, he ran off to tell other villages of what was happening. As the group reached the mountains, Seyren told them to take cover. Nodding to him, the haku group helped their injured to safety and watched their Lord prepare to fight.
The enemy surrounded Seyren at all sides, the mountain to his back. With swift handseals, Seyren activates his first move. "Itsukaku Hakuegei" The giant one-horned whale of snow and ice crashed into the enemy, eliminating half of the unsuspecting group. Right after he unleashed his jutsu, Seyren began running up the mountain. As half of the remaining group ran after him in a pincer movement, he began his second string of handseals. "Rouga Nadare no Jutsu" The snow began to fall like an avalanche from the mountains. Suddenly, the snow transformed into ice wolves. The wolves ran down the mountain behind Seyren, killing the groups chasing him before they were destroyed.
With the members chasing him dead, Seyren began to run back down the mountain whiles activating new handseals. "Souryuu Boufuusetsu" Two black ice dragons shot from either of his arms, raging towards his enemy. The dragons took down a couple members each, mainly causing panic in the group. With the panic happening, Seyren took it to his advantage and activated his finishing jutsu. "Shinko Makyou Hyoushou Senmetsu, True Demonic Ice Mirror Annihilation." Suddenly Seyren vanished. A dome of ice mirrors surrounded the remaining group. The dome looked like a crystalline snow globe, not a space left open. Little lines could be seen in the ice, showing the seperation of the mirrors. Suddenly, Seyren darted between the mirrors, looking invisible too all eyes but the members of his Haku group. Sensatsu Suishou jutsus flew from every mirror, instantly killing all shinobi within the dome.
After the assault finished and blood stained the ice, the dome shattered. Thousands of little shards of ice flew across the area, landing harmlessly on the ground. Slowly, Seyren landed on the ground in the middle of the massacre. Smiling towards his group, he motioned for them to come out. "It is over, the haku clan is back." Cheers went on, echoing in the mountainous region. The cheers could be heard for miles on end, sending shivers through the spines of anyone who heard it.. Cold. As. Ice.
So, only the Uchiha from the original three are left unless I make a sub plot for that weird demon dude.. Anyway, I probably need to work on Senju after that xD So how was this one?
Into the darkness we walk. We never look back, we never talk. And in the end, when all is said and done. I may have beat you, but no one really won.
Post by Shadow Dragon on Mar 4, 2008 17:58:32 GMT -5
A group walked through the wilderness a day's travel from konoha, the sun high in the sky. As they walked, three people traveled a little ahead. A man, who looked like the leader of the group, another ordinary man, and the man's soon. The two men had distinctive red eyes, with three clefts around each pupil. As they walked, the leader figure turned to the man and nodded to him. "You heard with I heard Kazuma?" The man nodded, told his son to go back and hide within the middle of the group, then answered the leader. "Yes, we have company Taisuke."
Out of the trees and foilage from nearby, twelve shinobi attacked. They wore no visible headbands, and each wore a camouflage vest and pants. The ninjas began to work instantly, the enemy shinobi began to circle the group, unleashing their g jutsus all at once. "Katon: Goukakyuu no jutsu!" The fireballs combined, a massive orb of doom crashing down upon the group of uchihas.
Taisuke cursed as the saw the men attack. "d**n, radicals. I can't see their village, but it's obvious they're a set of bloodline haters.." Cursing as he moved, Taisuke ran to the group and stuck his hands in the air. With quick handseals, he began to absorb the katon jutsu. After the energy was absorbed, he performed another handseal and used to absorbed chakra as a boost for his jutsu, "Katon: Ryuuka no jutsu!" The fire dragon raced across the ground, taking out two of the rogue shinobi. As this happened, Kazuma was performing handseals and the rest of the group vanished into the forest, hiding.
The radicals weren't done yet. In an effort to escape the jutsu, two of their men sacrificed their lives to stop the super-powered ryuuka skill, thus saving the other ten members. The other ten members retaliated, firing their Suiton: Suiryuudans simultaneously. The ten dragons swooped down, half aiming for each of the two standing uchiha members. The dragons crashed down, leaving an immense cloud of smoke in their wake.
A voice could be heard in the smoke, "Now Kazuma!" As the smoke cleared, the two uchiha stood standing. Taisuke had a katon shield up, protecting them with the dome. In the dome, Kazuma had finished his handseal, activating his jutsu, "Mangekyou Sharingan!" A wave of fear paced over the enemy shinobi as Kazuma's eyes began to change. His clefts now had lines connecting them to the pupil, forming a cross. Between each line was the arc of a circle, making the eyes look like crosshairs. Kazuma smiled after his jutsu activated, laughing at the group before him. With a flick of his hands, he began to fight.
Instantly, two of the men dropped into a deep sleep. The other eight men began to perform handseals, but before they could finish Kazuma had knocked out two and scared the others into backing up. Only one man continued his handseals, activating his jutsu. The Karyuu Endan began to head in Kazuma's direction, power enough to damage him greatly. Kazuma vanished in a flash, Taisuke appearing where he was before. With a quick handseal, Taisuke began to absorb the jutsu.
As Taisuke worked, Kazuma appeared in front of the other guy. Looking into his eyes, Kazuma activated his jutsu. "Tsukiyomi.." After mere seconds, the man crumpled to the floor. His remaining members began to run before they were shot down by various katon jutsus. Jumping out of the trees, the other uchiha members began calling out their comrades. Taisuke finished absorbing the katon jutsu and activated his own once more, a super powered Katon: Housenka jutsu. The four huge fireballs raised forward, incinerating the four incapacitated enemies instantly.
Taisuke and Kazuma deactivated their sharingans. Taisuke caught kazuma before he fell. The group rested for ten minutes, Kazuma's son staying close to him. After the rest, Taisuke looked at Kazuma. "You know that jutsu is dangerous. Either way, we're glad you're with us." Kazuma nodded, looking down at his son. His eyes twinkled as he watched him carefully. Patting him on the head, Kazuma got up. "Might as well continue on, can't let a couple radicals keep us away." Taisuke nodded at Kazuma, smiling. The group continued on, looking like nothing ever happened..
Original three finished now, if I make Senju that's supposedly it. Any other clans to work on? And how is it ? (I know I got a bit sloppy >_>)
Into the darkness we walk. We never look back, we never talk. And in the end, when all is said and done. I may have beat you, but no one really won.
Post by Shadow Dragon on Mar 5, 2008 16:18:21 GMT -5
Across the lands rumors have spread. Rumors of clans returning, returning from the very graves the world has placed them into. These rumors hold one thing in common: They are true.
Out of the remains of the Kiragakure's Haku clan rose a man. Seyren seemed to be the strongest Haku in history, causing destruction and wreaking havoc like it was a game. This man has brought together remnants of the Haku clan and they have begun to extract their revenge from the world that cast them aside. This clan has risen once more to bleed those who caused them to cry tears of blood, to destroy those who tried to destroy them. This clan has risen, and doesn't intend to return to the grave. Not so far off lay another story. Out of the rubbles of the nearside mountains came a bone-wielder a Kaguya dubbing himself stronger than Kimimaru. With an expert display of power this man showed it to be true. With the same idea in mind, they take their retribution. As this went on a group formed as well, another group of former clan members. With the destruction of radicals after them, the group of Uchiha has shown that they are back, and do not intend to let Itachi Uchiha stain the name they once proudly wore. Back into the world, these shinobi will once make make people proud to say they have the Uchiha on their side. All across the worlds similar clans, once thought extinct or near destruction, have risen. After waiting many long years, clans have returned to the world and have brought their greatly feared bloodlines with them. Not only has this happened, but an untold danger lies not too far in the future. What does this all mean? Is the return of clans for the better or worse? There is only once place where answers can be found: A Ninja's Universe.
How's that for a summary? Seems a bit big. I can try and cut it if you want? Or change it.. Well, I need criticism xP
Post by Sachi;;Tsunade on Mar 5, 2008 17:19:03 GMT -5
Actually, that's pretty good, although I was thinking of 're-modeling' the welcome table at the top so it shows a few important links. One of the links will be the full plot (with extra credits to you and Harris) so everyone can read it...
Okay, as for Alastar's question, I suppose you can be a mod because I really need one right now. I'm not going to make a specific thread about moderators, so just list what boards you want, etc...