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Hikaru
Mar 11, 2008 22:09:46 GMT -5
Post by Makoto Hikaru on Mar 11, 2008 22:09:46 GMT -5
T H E B A S I C S.Name: Makoto, Hikaru Age: 28 Rank: Raikage ~ (Lightning Shadow) Village of Origin: Amegakure Current Village: KumogakureA P P E A R A N C E.Height: 190.8 cm Weight:81.6 kg Distinguishing Marks: As if the tall, spiky yellow hair wasn’t enough to set Hikaru apart from the rest, a deep scar on the right cheek that runs from the jaw to the underside of the eye is the first thing many notice when face to face with the Raikage. C O M B A T. Strengths: Chakra Manipulation, Ninjutsu, Stamina, Intelligence, Speed Weaknesses: Genjutsu, A Bad Temper, Overconfidence Justsus: See Below Equipment List:
Scroll 1 - The first scroll is a miniature one that is hidden inside his left sleeve. It is used to produce one of three swords, all hand crafted by Kumogakure’s finest black smiths. The blades are as black as can be and have bright yellow edges, and each varies in overall length. The shortest can be called a dagger.
Summoning Tattoo 1 - A kanji branded in the palms of both Hikaru’s hands. At will, he can produced kunai, shuriken, fuuma shurikan, giant shuriken, or lines of wire by focusing chakra to those points.
Waist Pouch - Inside the pouch are custom made soldier provision pills, excelling in the restoration of chakra and curing of fatigue. There is also a stack of exploding notes.
Scroll 2 - A scroll that is bright red in color and tied to his yellow belt, this scroll was made solely for the containment of fire. Using the fire sealing method, Hikaru has been gathering flames for years and can produce them whenever he needs by applying chakra. T H E P E R S O N A L I T Y.Likes: The smell of rain, heavy thunder storms, spicey food, horror novels, playing cards. Dislikes: Noisy children, pests, Konohagakure inhabitants, paper work. Fears: Needles Habits: Standing ontop of the Raikage’s tower and creating lightning during minor storms. Hobbies: Playing cards, reading Personality: Hikaru has a very serious nature and isn’t one that takes well to opposition, disobedience, or disrespect. Many believe him to be a tyrant equal in cruelty to the past Mizukage and Kazekage, but his people value him greatly. His style of rule is a hard one to describe perfectly and must be experienced rather then explained.
Hikaru’s voice is tremendously deep and is comparable to thunder at times. He is constantly chewing someone out behind closed doors, so it’s a voice many know well. Hikaru, as the Raikage, is forced to work with the Kumogakure Elder Council and the Daimyo of the lands multiple occasions, but he does so reluctantly. He doesn’t exactly like either faction.T H E H I S T O R Y.As the story goes, there were three brothers born into poverty in Amegakure. Their father was a nukenin from Kumogakure and their mother was a hostage he’d taken along the way and kept as a servant. From day one, all the boys knew was verbal abuse. Their father would constantly accuse their mother of plotting to turn him when she had chance, since he obviously didn’t love him and was kept against her free will, and would beat her for within an inch of her life several times a week. Whenever that didn’t suffice for him, he would go after his children next with open handed slaps once they were old enough to take them. The only comfort the boys had was with each other, as the mother was kept under watch at all times.
He still isn’t exactly sure how it happened just yet, but his father was eventually captured and put to death by a Suna ninja seeking a bounty. Hikaru and his two brothers were put in the care of an aunt in Kumo, as his mother was also killed by unknown circumstances that day. Life already seemed like it was going to pick up, as enrollment in the ninja academy came quickly.
Each of the brothers had a natural knack for manipulating the Raiton affinity, but Hikaru in particular stood out in the trio. He was the worst, plain and simple. Teaching him anything short of academy jutsu was like teaching a dog to perform a back flip, it just didn’t seem to get anyone anywhere. Hikaru noticed how attention and training was beginning to shift off of him and towards his older siblings. They worked with him under the cover of night and kept him motivated to do his best in class but in the end, it was his own hard work and solo practice that started to propel Hikaru forward through the academy. Hikaru graduated at the age of 12, while his brothers did so at 11.
When the gennin years came, it was obvious that Hikaru was a late bloomer. He changed much in little time, rising to the position of a leader and genius quickly. Even though he was a mere gennin, he was a force to be reckoned with. His jounin instructor blessed him with several jutsu that were much too strong and unfit for a gennin to use, it was learning chakra manipulation the hard way. It was during these years he nearly perfected his use of Raiton and discovered his second affinity, Fuuton.
As a chuunin, Hikaru preferred solo missions rather then team efforts. Even when asked to work alongside his kin, he was hesitant to accept. He didn’t like the idea of others ruining his plans or challenging the things he said. He had a dominate spirit and frame of mind, as displayed during the chuunin exams the year before. His skill was undeniable though, as Hikaru began to dabble in Suiton techniques during this time. It was also at this time that the three brothers apparently had a falling out of some kind. This led the eldest brother to leave Kumogakure and return to Amegakure, and he was pursued by several ninja squads. One of which, Hikaru was a part of.
During his chuunin years Hikaru had also caught the eye of the third Raikage. It was against the wishes of the third that Hikaru pursued his brother on his own after an unsuccessful attempt to bring him in earlier that day. Much to Hikaru’s surprise, he wasn’t that difficult to track down after all. The true test came when he refused to return peacefully and a battle broke out. The two fought on even terms and the tide of the battle remained neutral. In a brief exchange of Raiton techniques, Hikaru proved to be somewhat more skilled. Things didn’t get any better when the third sibling appeared and attempted to solve things, resulting in a bodily injury that prevented him from living the life of a ninja after that day. Only the direct actions of the third Raikage quelled the fighting and somewhat mediated the situation, although the relationship between the three was never the same.
Upon his return to Kumogakure Hikaru focused more on his studies and training then ever, mostly because he was attempting to deal with his feelings without dealing with them. Aside from that, he was also deemed as one to be taken into consideration as the fourth Raikage. His natural dominate spirit and rebellious way of thinking would most likely cause sparks between himself and the council, but his talent as a shin obi was simply undeniable. After time Hikaru became the full time apprentice of the third, and after the third retirement due to old age, Hikaru accepted the title of Raikage. Three years have passed since that time and now, and Hikaru has only grown stronger in that time.
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Hikaru
Mar 11, 2008 22:12:41 GMT -5
Post by Makoto Hikaru on Mar 11, 2008 22:12:41 GMT -5
Universal Ninjutsu
~All E Rank Jutsu included~ Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion Gamayudan - Toad Oil Projectile Hiraishin no Jutsu - Flying Thunder God Technique Ikadzuchi no Kiba - Lightning Bolt Fang Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique Kai - Release Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Spiritualism Technique Mizu no Muchi - Whip of Water Pain's Chakra Detecting Rain (Unnamed) Pain's Absorption Technique (Unnamed) Raigeki no Yoroi - Lightning Strike Armor Raikyuu - Lightning Ball Rairyuu no Tatsumaki - Lightning Dragon Tornado Ranshinshou - Chaotic Mental Collision Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Multiple Shadow Clone Technique Toomegane no Jutsu - Telescope Technique
Raiton
[Raiton] Chidori Nagashi - Thousand Birds Current [Raiton] Chidori Senbon (Unnamed) [Raiton] Chidori Sword (Unnamed) [Raiton] Gian - False Darkness [Raiton] Kirin - Kirin [Raiton] Raikiri - Lightning Edge
Fuuton
[Fuuton] Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough [Fuuton] Renkuudan - Drilling Air Projectile [Fuuton] Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Suiton
[Suiton] Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves [Suiton] Hahonryuu - Destruction Torrent [Suiton] Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique [Suiton] Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field [Suiton] Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave [Suiton] Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile [Suiton] Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall [Suiton] Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique [Suiton] Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique [Suiton] Suishouha - Water Collision Destruction [Suiton] Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique [Suiton] Teppoudama - Bullet
Other Skills
Doton no Jutsu - Earth Release Technique Fuuka Houin - Fire Sealing Method Gogyou Fuuin - Five Elements Seal Gogyou Kaiin - Five Elements Unseal Raiton no Jutsu - Lightning Release Technique Shikumi no Jutsu - Death Viewing Technique (Killing Intent)
Taijutsu
Gouwan - Strong Arm
Genjutsu
Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique Nehan Shouja no Jutsu - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Custom Jutsu
Name: Kumogakure no Jutsu - Hidden Cloud Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu; Supplementary Description: Kumogakure no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique created by Team Sandaime, consisting of Hikaru and the 3rd Raikages other two students during their gennin-jounin years. It was developed whenever the trio had a run-in with a squad of Hidden Mist ninja and saw the Kirigakure no Jutsu first hand. The trio took it upon themselves to create a response to that technique, and thus the Hidden Cloud Jutsu was born. It is simply the process of creating thick cumulus clouds on the ground to effect an opponents vision.
Name: Arashi Tsukurite - Storm Maker Rank: - Type: Other Skill; Supplementary Descriptin: Arashi Tsukurite is the process of creating storm clouds overhead and use with other jutsu. Depending on the users rank, the storm clouds will vary in size, distance covered, and potency. Hikaru generally does this by untying his fire scroll and twirling it around his body over head as if it were a ribbon. A sphere of flames will form around him and he will then use a Fuuton technique to direct it towards the sky in a column of fire. This begins the cloud forming process.
Name: [Raiton] Arashi Tsukurite Adauchi - Storm Maker Retaliation Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu; Offensive Description: Arashi Tsukurite Adauchi is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the lightning element. After creating storm clouds to take advantage of, Hikaru will use a Raiton technique to cause a positive charge on the ground. The positive charge will react attract the negative electrons in the clouds and cause an instant discharge between the two sets, lightning bolts raining down at the speed of light. The jutsu is comparable to Uchiha Sasuke’s Kirin technique, as it uses natures power as a destructive force. The difference is that Hikaru can cause multiple strikes by covering a larger field with the positive charge, and can continue to use the technique as long as there are clouds to use and he has chakra to create the charge.
Name: [Fuuton] Kaze no Ya - Arrow of Wind Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu ; Offensive Description: Kaze no Ya is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the wind element. After forming the needed hand seal, Hikaru will inhale deeply and imbue the air in his lungs with chakra. He will then blow out a arrow at a specified target. Unlike a regular arrow that can face resistance, the arrow of wind can slice with little difficulty.
Name: [Fuuton] Tenkou Sutoraido no Waza - Art of the Air Stride Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu; Supplementary Description: Tenkou Sutoraido no Waza is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the wind element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will be able to send intense waves of air and chakra out of multiple tenketsu points on a certain part of the body, enabling them to go airborne in an instant and direct themselves. Because it is only a burst of air and not a constant stream, the technique produces more of a gliding effect then actual flight.
Name: [Raiton] Rensa Ninjuu no Jutsu - Chains of Submission Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu; Supplementary Description: Rensa Ninjuu is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the lightning element. After forming the needed chain seals, the user will outstretch their arm and point their fingers at the target. Streams of lightning will then arc from their fingertips and bind the opponent, delivering a powerful shock to their body among contact. The user can stop the shocks whenever they please, which gives them the option of holding the target in place and literally shocking them until they give in or pass out. The chains can be ‘shorted out’ by suiton techniques.
Name: [Raiton] Kondakutamane - Conductor Imitation Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu; Supplementary Description: Kondakutamane is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the lightning element. Modeled after the chakra absorption techniques, this just in particular allows the user to absorb natural electricity or lightning (not elemental chakra) and use it to ‘recharge’ their chakra reserves. The user must hold the rat hand seal throughtout the entire process and they must remain completely still until the jutsu is complete. Stopping the recharging process involves gradually halting ones chakra flow and allowing the electricity to return to the source. Thus, the user can put themselves in harms way by either stopping their chakra flow too quickly, or stopping it too late and overloading their body. This jutsu requires perfect timing and complete concentration.
Name: [Fuuton] KazeKoutsuushadan - Wind Blockage Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu; Defensive Description: KazeKoutsuushadan is a ninjutsu technique utiling the wind element. After forming the needed hand seal, the user will expel wind molded chakra from the tenketsu of the lower body. The wind will quickly rise upward and form a wall of wind to repel attacks. If the user pivots on a foot while expelling the chakra, it will form a sphere of wind around them.
Name: [Fuuton + Suiton + Raiton] Mittsukouyou Kujo no Yochi - Three Elements Destruction of Earth Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu; Offensive, Defensive Description: Mittsukouyuo Kujo no Yochi is a ninjutsu technique that combines the wind, lightning, and water elements to create a single, catastrophic force. After performing an extensive (as in more then one post) chain of hand seals, the user will end by holding their hands in the bird seal. A powerful wind will come down from the heavens and begin to spin before them, sucking in everything around it. The user will then blow a jet of water into the wind, forming a spinning vortex of wind and water that is still drawing in the surroundings. The wind is swirling so quickly that is can easily shred the densest of materials that come into contact with it, and the water also can do the same by forming miniature blades. Once the user breaks the hand seal, their chakra will erupt out of their body in a most depleting manner and form a surge of lightning, which is attracted into the funnel winds by the water and forcibly strikes anything caught inside.
Name: Suiton: Enkou Henkan Sakuryaku ~ (Water Release: Flammable Conversion Tactic) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Description: Suiton • Enkou Henkan Sakuryaki is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the water element. After forming the needed hand seal, the user can convert a source of water that they are making physical contact with into a flammable liquid called Naphtha, which has a high temperature flash point and cant be extinguished with just water once it catches fire.
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 15:42:22 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dragon on Mar 12, 2008 15:42:22 GMT -5
Accepted. Be careful, kage is an entirely different level of game-play Anyway, good luck Rokuro. [/size][/move][/b]
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 16:19:30 GMT -5
Post by Harris on Mar 12, 2008 16:19:30 GMT -5
Hold Up. I find an issue with you knowing Chidori, since only Sasuke and Kakashi know it (it's their custom)
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 16:24:54 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dragon on Mar 12, 2008 16:24:54 GMT -5
Anyone can copy it if they try hard enough. Pure chakra manipulated in a physical form. It also uses lightning natured chakra. He's Raikage, it's a lot easier for him since he's in tune with that element especially. So he's allowed to have it.
If all this was the case, then your shadow jutsus wouldn't make sense. They were unique to the Nara clan and not Orochimaru with which whom you trained. Also, not only did you seem to manage to get "Lotus" jutsus, which are what only Gai and Lee used, but you also have "Dynamic Entry", "Ink Jutsus", and "Flute Jutsus". Now, they may or may not have been unique, we don't know. All the information that was given to us was that no one else had used them. Which is the same thing as saying chidori and raikiri are unique to who created them. Someone else could have picked up the idea, who's to say?
This Profile was approved, let it be. Final.
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Roku-kun
Jounin
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Give me a reason, and I'll find a way...
Posts: 152
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 16:30:58 GMT -5
Post by Roku-kun on Mar 12, 2008 16:30:58 GMT -5
Go eat a burger and choke. I have a problem with you having an unblockable and unavoidable insta-kill jutsu when there are atleast 2 cannon jutsu made to counter act such a thing.
....stfu...
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 17:44:36 GMT -5
Post by Harris on Mar 12, 2008 17:44:36 GMT -5
If all this was the case, then your shadow jutsus wouldn't make sense. They were unique to the Nara clan and not Orochimaru with which whom you trained. Also, not only did you seem to manage to get "Lotus" jutsus, which are what only Gai and Lee used, but you also have "Dynamic Entry", "Ink Jutsus", and "Flute Jutsus". Now, they may or may not have been unique, we don't know. All the information that was given to us was that no one else had used them. Which is the same thing as saying chidori and raikiri are unique to who created them. Someone else could have picked up the idea, who's to say? This Profile was approved, let it be. Final. I trained under a sound nin, not Orochimaru. Shadows arn't Nara only, though That's Nara's thing. Shadows. For lotuses, you forgot Sasuke and Kakashi. It's assumed that although they are hard to learn, people can learn them. Ink and Flute arn't exclusives as far as it says on any website
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 17:57:19 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dragon on Mar 12, 2008 17:57:19 GMT -5
"Orochimaru trained him to use the Shadow Jutshus. Orochimaru's ninjas eventually grew angry." - Quote from your profile.
Orochimaru doesn't have shadow jutsus. As well as sasuke and kakashi using sharingan to copy the style of lotus, though Sasuke doesn't have lotus. Sasuke created his own move.
Ink and Flute aren't said to be exclusives, nor the other way around. It's like the elastic clause in the constitution. It can go one way or the other. Besides. Just because there was no one else in the show that was shown to have the jutsu, doesn't mean no one did or could. Jutsus can be learnt by watching a person and figuring it out yourself, it's called doing work and research. Shinobi research to, it's how they actually have some skill.
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 18:20:37 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dragon on Mar 12, 2008 18:20:37 GMT -5
You like messing with GM's huh?
Check your post: Last Modify: 6:17 Today, My Time.
You modified from Orochimaru to Okumarubi. You really like screwing with the wrong people huh? Don't reply to this thread anymore, I'm talking to Sachi about this. Also: I will delete every reply to this thread from you about this subject, If you want to complain, do it through PM's. Rokuro's character is no longer being spammed.
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Hikaru
Mar 12, 2008 18:27:12 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dragon on Mar 12, 2008 18:27:12 GMT -5
I issued you a warning. Do not make me issue you another. You've spammed enough profiles and such, Quit making things up, you know just as well as I do and other people that you've been abusing modify.
EDIT: I told you to complain through PM, no where else. Formal Complaint sent.
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Hikaru
Mar 13, 2008 15:00:46 GMT -5
Post by Sachi;;Tsunade on Mar 13, 2008 15:00:46 GMT -5
There was proof of a direct quote, saying that Orochimaru trained Sengar and from your profile. You know you can't control Orochimaru since he's already a cannon.
But look at it this way: Since Harris changed it back, it's not Oro anymore, and since it's not Oro anymore, it's not God-play. However, you can't go around modifying profiles and then say that it wasn't the original text, and make sure you look at the obvious reasons of a profile before confronting anyone. For example:
You said that Kianse's profile should not be approved because she did not list any jutsus. That's why I created a custom jutsu sub-board, so you can make your own jutsu. And also, the jutsu section clearly says that it is temporary which means that you do not have to fill it out. It was only there to organize any approved jutsus and what-not.
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Hikaru
Mar 13, 2008 15:09:46 GMT -5
Post by Harris on Mar 13, 2008 15:09:46 GMT -5
It was Orochimaru over 4 months ago. When I originally pmed u, I said I found part of my profile to be god modding and that I wanted to fix it.
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Hikaru
Mar 13, 2008 15:15:04 GMT -5
Post by Sachi;;Tsunade on Mar 13, 2008 15:15:04 GMT -5
Again, I have proof on that...I can see when you've last modified your post, and it was yesterday and at the time Shadow gave. Either you modified the Orochimaru part, or something else...And I also don't remember getting a PM from you that said the God-play part.
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Hikaru
Mar 13, 2008 15:17:32 GMT -5
Post by Harris on Mar 13, 2008 15:17:32 GMT -5
I modified the wolf summoning (added in the "how to summon" rules) and removed a few techniques (Sound Techniques and Painting techniques. Although I own the shops, I technecally never purchased those)
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Hikaru
Mar 13, 2008 15:37:55 GMT -5
Post by Sachi;;Tsunade on Mar 13, 2008 15:37:55 GMT -5
Okay....I guess that's a reasonable answer..
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